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Fade to Black

July 21, 2016 5 Comments

Fade to Black

By Roy Dorman

Johnny Edwards awakened to the steady beep, beep, beep of a vehicle backing up outside. Although his eyes were still closed, he saw the play of red light strobing across his ceiling. He wondered if old Mrs. Jenkins in the apartment downstairs had suffered a heart attack.

He was somewhat startled when his eyes refused to open.

“He’s in here; I think he’s breathing, but he won’t wake up.”

“Mr. Edwards! Can you hear me?”

’Course I can hear ya; yer yelling in my ear, was Johnny’s last thought. It became totally dark, the red light no longer behind his lids.

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  1. Vibha Lohani says

    July 21, 2016 at 10:00 am

    Crisp and yet leaves a yearn for more. Good story

    Reply
    • Roy Dorman says

      July 22, 2016 at 5:35 am

      Thanks, Vibha. Glad you liked it.

      Reply
  2. Gina says

    July 22, 2016 at 8:18 am

    Sadly haunting.

    Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    July 22, 2016 at 2:38 pm

    Great, bittersweet irony here. A tale well told.

    Reply
  4. Roy Dorman says

    July 22, 2016 at 5:16 pm

    Thanks for the feedback. It’s appreciated.

    Reply

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