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Falling Barometer

January 23, 2016 6 Comments

Falling Barometer

By Kirsten Leggett

I knew this story was coming. I could feel it brewing like a low pressure cell off the coast, making its way toward the shore. I waited some. To see what would happen.

The wind picked up a notch and scattered my thoughts to make space. Then the spitting of words started with a heavy drop here, a splat there, and then the deluge, which soaked my skin from the inside out—a tropical storm filling rivers.

Limitless flow.

The cell moves on, as quickly as it had come, over land, clinging to mountains, brewing and searching for the next word.

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  1. Mike Haran says

    January 23, 2016 at 9:30 am

    Pretty good if stories just appear,I get mine by recalling past events.

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  2. Jeanne Althouse says

    January 23, 2016 at 9:55 am

    Lovely metaphor.

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  3. Vesna says

    January 23, 2016 at 12:30 pm

    Wow. Not only is this a complete story but also totally fresh and really resonates. And it’s a piece of writing about writing that’s not self-indulgent or boring! In 101 words! Rarity.

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    • Kirsten says

      January 23, 2016 at 1:03 pm

      Thank you Vesna for your kind words! I am thrilled it resonates.

      Reply
  4. John La Briola says

    January 23, 2016 at 2:38 pm

    Flash flood? Enjoyed that.

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  5. Bobby Warner says

    January 23, 2016 at 8:06 pm

    Inspiration is a bit like an approaching storm, isn’t it? At least it is for me. Good story, Kirsten!

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