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Falling Star

June 12, 2017 4 Comments

Falling Star

By Jim Bonnor

They meander home from the pub, alongside the dry ditch, hand in hand as they have for more than twenty years. The porter stout sky is so clear, a head of stars effervescing across it.

They stop and crane their necks.

“The stars remind me of you,” he slurs.

“Really?” she hiccups. “Must be my eyes.”

“No.”

“Oh? … my sparkling smile, then?”

“Nope.”

“Mmm … perhaps my hair, gossamer grey, like the Milky Way?”

“Nuhuh.”

“What then?”

“It’s the countless bloody trivial errands you make me run.”

He sees stars from the bottom of the ditch and grins at her celestial laughter.

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  1. Sue O'Donovan says

    June 13, 2017 at 5:44 am

    That made me chuckle at the end of it. Cute and true.

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  2. Susan Sutherland says

    June 13, 2017 at 11:22 am

    Well done, made me chuckle too!

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  3. Jack Spies says

    June 13, 2017 at 12:49 pm

    Stellar insight.

    Reply
  4. JacciGoodingAuthor says

    June 14, 2017 at 9:03 am

    How sweet! Absolutely Lovely!

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