
By Simon Hole
Beth could only feel her way into memory. She closed her eyes and—shaking slightly—reached out with her wrinkled hands. Touching his face, she was transported. They were young, standing on the beach before the minister, smelling the saltwater, hearing the breakers, and saying their vows. A smile spread across her face, then and now.
Tears leaked from Steven’s eyes as he watched his wife of sixty-two years smile. Afraid his voice would disrupt whatever memory she was enjoying, he whispered, “I know you are still in there, Beth. I wish you could come back to me. I love you.”
Gentle. Tender. Meaningful. Not easy to do in 101 words. Good job.
Very good—Heart felt and carring
Very poignant; the love and caring is palpable. Great job.
Nice Story
Thank you, all.