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Fat Kid Pride

May 22, 2019 16 Comments

Fat Kid Pride

By Brian Taylor

It seemed Bobby had two kinds of days at school, bullied or ignored. Today was the latter.

Lunch alone. Nachos. Good, but the chips were stale. While eating, a chip got stuck in his windpipe.

He couldn’t panic. They’d laugh.

He stood and walked discreetly from the cafeteria; then he dashed to the boy’s room. Thankfully, empty.

He had to act fast. He went into a stall, locked it, knelt by the toilet, put a finger down his throat, and retched until the chip came free. Tearfully, he gasped. Just a raw throat.

He saved his own life and nobody knew.

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Comments

  1. David Derey says

    May 22, 2019 at 5:54 am

    powerful! your best, yet!

    Reply
    • Brian says

      May 22, 2019 at 4:25 pm

      Thank you so much, David. I really appreciate that.

      Reply
  2. Chad says

    May 22, 2019 at 7:22 am

    Tragic tale, with every word contributing. Kudos.

    Reply
    • Brian says

      May 22, 2019 at 4:26 pm

      Thank you, Chad.

      Reply
  3. Susan says

    May 22, 2019 at 8:26 am

    A sad commentary on the reality some children deal with daily. Well done!

    Reply
    • Brian says

      May 22, 2019 at 4:27 pm

      Thank you Susan.

      Reply
  4. June Rogers says

    May 22, 2019 at 9:58 am

    So bittersweet. Well rendered.

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    • Brian says

      May 22, 2019 at 4:28 pm

      Thank you, June.

      Reply
  5. JK Hayward-Trout says

    May 22, 2019 at 11:41 am

    Moving. A good story.

    Reply
    • Brian says

      May 22, 2019 at 4:29 pm

      Thank you, JK.

      Reply
  6. Mike says

    May 22, 2019 at 7:06 pm

    That was great. Good job, sir!

    Reply
    • Brian says

      May 22, 2019 at 8:04 pm

      Thank you, Mike.

      Reply
  7. jason pinto says

    May 23, 2019 at 3:09 am

    great job………….or today would be his first kind of day…bullied…

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    • Brian says

      May 23, 2019 at 2:10 pm

      Thank you, Jason.

      Reply
  8. Rosemary Reader and Writer says

    May 23, 2019 at 11:00 am

    Powerful and very sad.

    Reply
    • Brian says

      May 23, 2019 at 2:11 pm

      Thank you, Rosemary.

      Reply

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