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Fillings

October 5, 2016 6 Comments

Fillings

By Karen Lau

Emmanuel sat imperiously in the center of the table, twisting his Oreo cookie with scrupulous care. He freed the chocolate top and ran his discerning tongue across the white patch of creamy confection, licking, then scraping it clean with his front teeth. The plain black disks, fallen from royal favor, were laid aside in a tidy pile.

“Is your Auntie Mari pretty? Auntie Mari is pretty, right?” Tobacco mingled with her cloying perfume.

He moved on to his sandwich without pause, discarding the bread, extracting the ham, and rolling it into a neat joint.

Stentorian. Sensible. Sagely. “Only insides matter, Auntie.”

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  1. avalinakreska says

    October 5, 2016 at 9:40 am

    What a great ending and punchline – really enjoyed that story.

    Reply
    • Karen Yoostem says

      October 6, 2016 at 7:10 am

      Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

      Reply
  2. Bobby Warner says

    October 5, 2016 at 6:28 pm

    Cute and witty. That youngster has the wisdom of Solomon!

    Reply
    • Karen Yoostem says

      October 6, 2016 at 7:12 am

      Thanks! And yep, he’s a wise one!

      Reply
  3. kageha says

    October 10, 2016 at 1:26 pm

    wise child. i like him

    Reply
  4. davejamesashton says

    October 10, 2016 at 10:28 pm

    I thought this was quite well done

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