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First Flight

April 2, 2022 3 Comments

By Rosie Garland & Meg Pokrass

Father lets go of the saddle; the bicycle tilts and she tilts with it. With odd slowness she hurtles over the handlebars into nothing. Grazes gravel, pinned under the skeleton of the frame. She’s back on her feet before Father can catch up, his face a squeezed mass of fear. She smiles, pretends it doesn’t hurt. Can usually read his expression, but somewhere she’s made a mistake. Tears line his nose. She wonders if she should have whimpered, waited for him to rescue her. Her hair, no longer long the way he loves it, cut too short to buckle into curls.

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  1. Deborah Burke Henderson says

    April 2, 2022 at 9:55 am

    Love the image and the glimpse of growing up and away. “Buckle” is a great word choice!

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  2. Caroline says

    April 6, 2022 at 9:58 am

    Love ‘squeezed mass of fear’.

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  3. Sally says

    April 8, 2022 at 5:24 pm

    Lovely story. Too familiar. Good work.

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