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First Love

January 5, 2021 20 Comments

By Lisa Chambers

Sarah Ann, the girl with golden curls wrapped in pink ribbons. Kevin’s secret crush, the object of many stolen glances and bashful smiles.

Still painfully shy, he fondly recalled wishful childhood imaginings he never outgrew. Seeing her picture recently reignited old feelings. It was finally time to tell her how he felt. Rehearsing it in his mind, rose in hand, he made his way across town.

Standing at the gate, Kevin summoned his nerve before walking in. There, at the stone angel, he paused, tracing her name in the granite heart before pouring out his own.

No more words left unsaid.

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  1. Mary A Gorman says

    January 5, 2021 at 7:22 am

    Beautiful

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    • Lisa says

      January 5, 2021 at 8:19 am

      Thank you, Mary.

      Reply
  2. Susan says

    January 5, 2021 at 8:46 am

    By the time I got to “stone angel”, there was a tear in my eye. Simply beautiful, Lisa.

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    • Lisa says

      January 5, 2021 at 9:43 am

      Oh Susan, thank you! ?

      Reply
    • Lisa says

      January 5, 2021 at 9:49 am

      I tried to put a smiling face on my comment to you, but it is showing as a ?. Always appreciate your comments, Susan. Thank you!

      Reply
      • Susan says

        January 5, 2021 at 1:47 pm

        You’re welcome, Lisa. I always love your stories, but I found this one especially touching.

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  3. Cathy Cade says

    January 5, 2021 at 9:07 am

    Sad.
    (That’ll teach him to procrastinate)

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    • Lisa says

      January 5, 2021 at 9:45 am

      Thanks for your comment, Cathy.

      Reply
  4. Derek says

    January 5, 2021 at 10:24 am

    I like the twist in the tale. This is a poignant story.

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    • Lisa says

      January 5, 2021 at 11:56 am

      Thank you, Derek.

      Reply
  5. charles a byrd says

    January 5, 2021 at 11:24 am

    Another great one Lisa.

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    • Lisa says

      January 5, 2021 at 11:35 am

      Thank you so much, my friend!

      Reply
  6. Joanna Cozzolino says

    January 5, 2021 at 1:12 pm

    Great Story!

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    • Lisa says

      January 5, 2021 at 1:22 pm

      Thank you, Joanna.

      Reply
  7. I.R.Pathak says

    January 6, 2021 at 9:47 am

    Great, wonderful. Impressive use of sensory words.

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    • Lisa says

      January 6, 2021 at 10:44 am

      Thanks for your comment, I.R.

      Reply
  8. Bruce Gunther says

    January 7, 2021 at 12:47 pm

    Excellent story…nice work!

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    • Lisa says

      January 7, 2021 at 1:09 pm

      Thanks for your kind comment, Bruce.

      Reply
  9. Louise Molinar says

    January 8, 2021 at 11:41 am

    Wow, beautiful!!

    Reply
    • Lisa says

      January 8, 2021 at 11:57 am

      Thank you, Louise!

      Reply

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