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Following Smoke

July 5, 2017 4 Comments

Following Smoke

By Jim Byrnes

The smoke from the funeral pyre is mesmerizing as it travels a circuitous upward path, seeking its vanishing point.

Many people encircle the fire as they pay their last respects and say their goodbyes.

I briefly focus on my daughter as I put names to nearly all of the faces swaying around the dancing, warming flames. Most wear radiant smiles and are graced by a few tears. The scene is celebratory, not about mourning the loss of a life, but rather a loving remembrance of a life well lived.

I feel great happiness as I am released from my earthly bounds.

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  1. David Silver says

    July 5, 2017 at 5:04 am

    Fabulous twist. Loved it.

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  2. glkamens says

    July 5, 2017 at 7:00 am

    Best wishes in the Great Hereafter!

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    July 5, 2017 at 7:45 pm

    The last line is a stunner. Completely unexpected. Great, great job, Jim.

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  4. Ariffa says

    July 7, 2017 at 6:58 am

    Wow. Just wow.

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