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Forbidden Fruit

January 19, 2025 4 Comments

By Glynis Goyns

Banned from the vegetable patch, we were tempted by two laden cherry trees. The nuns were in chapel. The fruit was ripe. The time was right.

“I can stuff the most cherries in my mouth,” I boasted clambering into a tree. “Keep the pips as proof,” I said, guzzling fruit. No more words. Cheeks swollen with the evidence.

Absorbed, we missed approaching footsteps. “What are you doing?” demanded Sister Hildegard.

Wide-eyed, I choked as a pip lodged in my windpipe. Splattering cherries, I fell at her feet struggling to breathe. Fiercely, she thumped my back.

“Forbidden fruit!” she smirked with satisfaction.

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  1. David Higham says

    January 22, 2025 at 7:23 am

    Wonderfully witty story.

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  2. PK says

    January 22, 2025 at 9:36 am

    Witty – made me smile. Thank you!

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  3. Ed Kratz says

    January 22, 2025 at 8:30 pm

    Fun story. Witty for sure.

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  4. Marie says

    January 23, 2025 at 12:11 pm

    Lovely story

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