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Forever 39

August 5, 2019 13 Comments

Forever 39

By Alison Ogilvie-Holme

Eyes closed, I make a wish before extinguishing the candles.

“Wow! All in one breath! Your wish may actually come true.”

“Fat chance!” I say, “I wished that I wasn’t turning forty today.”

Laughter abounds. My husband cuts the cake, handing the first piece to the aging birthday girl/woman. Where did the years go? I glance around the room at loved ones, noting the clock. Exactly two minutes until my official time of birth.

Devouring chocolate bliss. Prickles course my arm. Dizziness. Sweat dripping like melting wax. I clutch my chest then hit the ground in regret. Farewell to forty.

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  1. Adelaide B. Shaw says

    August 5, 2019 at 8:33 am

    Oh, be careful of what you wish. Good story.
    Adelaide

    Reply
    • Alison Ogilvie-Holme says

      August 5, 2019 at 2:17 pm

      Thanks, Adelaide!

      Reply
  2. diannemoritz says

    August 5, 2019 at 11:22 am

    Wow! I’ll never make those kind of comments again! Great story, terrific ending.

    Reply
    • Alison Ogilvie-Holme says

      August 5, 2019 at 2:21 pm

      Thank you, Dianne!

      Reply
  3. Vivian says

    August 5, 2019 at 12:52 pm

    Perfect!

    Reply
    • Alison Ogilvie-Holme says

      August 5, 2019 at 2:22 pm

      Thanks, Vivian!

      Reply
  4. stella murovic says

    August 6, 2019 at 7:39 am

    Great story Alison – be careful what you wish for…just a reminder. Bravo
    stella

    Reply
    • Alison Ogilvie-Holme says

      August 6, 2019 at 8:57 am

      Thank you, Stella!

      Reply
  5. throughthecolouredglass says

    August 6, 2019 at 1:23 pm

    wow brilliant

    Reply
    • Alison Ogilvie-Holme says

      August 6, 2019 at 9:08 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  6. Rosemary Reader and Writer says

    August 7, 2019 at 5:37 pm

    Be careful of what you wish for!

    Reply
  7. Patti Whiteland says

    August 13, 2019 at 2:55 pm

    Great story! I’ll never blow all the candles out at once again

    Reply
  8. Alison Ogilvie-Holme says

    August 13, 2019 at 3:32 pm

    Thanks, Patti!

    Reply

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