By Kenzie Edgar
My friends all tell me I have no taste in men and here lies the proof.
I should be out on a Friday night, drinking and dancing with my mates, not digging in the middle of a forest.
It all started off so well. Going for long walks, holding hands and sharing secrets. Then it all changed. I wanted to play the field. I’m a normal sixteen year old girl so I’m not settling down with an older man of twenty one. So he had to go. At least, unlike me, he’s not alone. I’m burying him beside the other three.
Well told story! I liked the pacing, it’s amazing what you’ve accomplished in so few words.
great story all around…concise, surprising, good mixture of dark and light. Bravo!
Clever story! I enjoyed it. I have a sixteen year old daughter. While I’m quite certain there are no buried bodies out there, your character’s voice sounded exactly like a sixteen year old. Well done!
Nice. Needs a little polish.
Holy crap! Was not expecting that ?
Holy crap! Was not expecting that ?
Well done. Great idea.
– how did you dispatch them? There’s a longer story there.
Very nice story!!!
creepy! classic horror.