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Fourteen

January 25, 2017 5 Comments

Fourteen

By Doreen Frick

I was fourteen once. I climbed trees; I wrote letters to boys. And I felt a freedom I’ve not felt since. Because when I was fourteen the world was possible. Boys and Nature and Me, and maybe not even in that order.

Fourteen meant that there was still a whole life to live, and I couldn’t wait to live it. Little did I realize that the best of life was when I was climbing that tree, looking out at the world around me, dreaming.

Not planning, just dreaming. No worries. No hurry. Just me and the blue sky and a dream.

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  1. Barbara Younger says

    January 25, 2017 at 7:23 am

    I remember fourteen so well! What an age and you’ve captured it.

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  2. Thomas Minder says

    January 25, 2017 at 8:07 am

    Nice reflection of carefree days and the what we left behind.

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  3. b. says

    January 25, 2017 at 9:13 am

    My recollection is not as clear as yours, but I do believe that at one time we may have shared similar dreams.
    Well written and well paced. Let your dreams flow and continue to express them with your poetic writing.

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  4. Bobby Warner says

    January 25, 2017 at 9:37 am

    14–a truly magical age. I recall looking forward to high school–while still savoring what was left of my summer vacation! I wasn’t looking forward to any great things happening, and might have been somewhat afraid of what the future might bring–not that I let that stand in the way of my freedom! Liked this story a lot.

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  5. Wolfe says

    January 25, 2017 at 4:35 pm

    What hapoened to teenage angst: Am I smart enough, tall enough, popular enough? Can I make the swim team, will I get invited to the next party, will I get chosen first or last at the next pickup game?
    Am I ever going to get rid of these zits?
    And when will Noona stop kissing me..?

    14 again? Nah….!! To

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