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Friendly

December 13, 2018 11 Comments

Friendly

By Brian Taylor

People just aren’t friendly anymore. At least, they aren’t to me.

I know I shouldn’t take it personally, but I can’t help it. I try to be nice, but it seems like the nicer I am, people are still rude.

Like tonight at the grocery store. I was checking out and I said to the pretty cashier, “Chilly this evening, isn’t it?”

She just goes, “Hmm.” Seriously?

She wasn’t the only one, of course, just the most blatant.

Glad I’m home.

“Hi, Bill! How was your day?”

Ugh. My annoying neighbor, Leslie.

“Hey,” I say, hurrying to get in my apartment.

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  1. Iqbal Hussain says

    December 13, 2018 at 7:04 am

    HAHAH! love that. Beautifully told, funny and actually quite poignant too – someone not understanding his own behaviour.

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  2. Iqbal Hussain says

    December 13, 2018 at 7:05 am

    Nicely done! The end made me laugh. A beautifully observed piece about how we often fail to see our own behaviour.

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  3. David Derey says

    December 13, 2018 at 7:33 am

    a good critique of one of our many many hypocrisies as a specie.

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  4. cascondaville says

    December 13, 2018 at 9:01 am

    This made me laugh!! Great job!

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  5. Susan says

    December 13, 2018 at 9:50 am

    A great story…seriously!

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  6. Gerald Kamens says

    December 13, 2018 at 10:54 am

    Guess Leslie — presumably that’s a woman — wasn’t pretty enuf!

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  7. Michele says

    December 13, 2018 at 6:26 pm

    So true and very funny!

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  8. Brian Taylor (@BrianTa85645236) says

    December 14, 2018 at 2:54 am

    Thank you everyone for the kind comments. I really appreciate it.

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  9. Kathy Jackson says

    December 14, 2018 at 10:03 am

    That was awesome Billy!! Makes you look in the mirror!

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  10. Jeff Stone says

    December 16, 2018 at 2:11 am

    Clever and funny.

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  11. Dan says

    December 17, 2018 at 12:43 am

    A lot of self-reflection inspired by 101 words…

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