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Frigid

August 19, 2019 4 Comments

Frigid

By Mandira Pattnaik

At age seven, Millie unlocked a frigid home, taped her knee bruised from playing at school, and waited for Mum to come home from work. Mum didn’t notice her wound or the stained floor; she talked instead of painting her nails purple. At age eleven, Millie showed her grades to Dad on the wall; he smiled from behind the glass—he always did. Mum returned sloshed, cursing Allan, and went straight to bed. Yesterday, Millie got a scholarship to study at Warmouth. She packed her bags and left before Mum was home. Her terse note rested on a woefully frigid desk.

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  1. Stef Smulders says

    August 19, 2019 at 7:24 am

    Chilling!

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  2. Rebecca says

    August 19, 2019 at 7:32 am

    Sad but hopeful!

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  3. Lynda Kirby says

    August 19, 2019 at 3:55 pm

    Nice. Optimistic.

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  4. Mary E Falkner says

    September 2, 2019 at 5:22 am

    Poor poor girl. But with hope, generated from her own strength.

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