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Front Crawl

January 9, 2021 3 Comments

By Julian Dores

Back then I went swimming every day; it was what kept me going. In the locker room, I avoided eye contact with the other boys. Felt the pleasant smell of chlorine as I approached the pool.

A rush of cold. Butterfly, then front crawl. Alternating strokes, legs kicking, fast-moving blue tiles. Gliding. The air erupting from my lungs in muffled rage, like secret oblivion. “Look,” kids often whispered in school as I walked past. “The faggot.”

Afterward I floated on my back; gazed up at the bright lights. The water eased my mind, you see. It listened. The water was my friend.

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  1. Joanna says

    January 9, 2021 at 7:48 am

    Great Story. I can relate to water and swimming being his solace.

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  2. Joanna says

    January 9, 2021 at 7:48 am

    Great story. I can relate to the water and swimming being his solace.

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  3. Rita says

    January 13, 2021 at 11:53 am

    Finding a peaceful place is imperative for everyone, especially those who are bullied. Nice story.

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