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Full Circle

March 10, 2016 10 Comments

Full Circle

By Lorah Blesse

She cries out. Her husband squeezes her hand, cradles her.

I want to comfort her but hold my seat and accept my place. My only child, all grown up.

Time rewinds twenty-three years.

“You have a baby girl!” More love than I’d ever known.

Late nights of infancy, skinned knees, swim meets, prom. Battles of will, chick flicks, long lunches, texts to say ‘I’m sorry.’ Cherished memories of my daughter, my whole world.

Life revisited, awaiting a new chapter.

An exhausted sob, one last push. “It’s a boy!”

A new wail echoes.

I hold my grandson and my heart explodes anew.

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  1. angelallindseth says

    March 10, 2016 at 9:41 am

    Fantastic story!

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    March 10, 2016 at 10:05 am

    A very upbeat story. I like it when all ends well.

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  3. Jennifer Freed says

    March 10, 2016 at 10:17 am

    I’m not a grandmother (yet??), but I related to that feeling in your last line — that heart-explosion of love. Nice.

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  4. jlcourtney says

    March 10, 2016 at 10:25 am

    Powerful tale. Great job, Lorah!

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  5. Kerry E.B. Black says

    March 10, 2016 at 11:39 am

    Touching and well done.

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  6. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    March 10, 2016 at 4:04 pm

    Heartfelt and a nice way to end the story. Good work.

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  7. Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

    March 10, 2016 at 4:44 pm

    Great title, too. And ditto what everyone said!

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  8. Jimmy says

    March 11, 2016 at 6:25 am

    Perfect.

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  9. Jeanne Althouse says

    March 11, 2016 at 2:18 pm

    Lovely. One of the best this month.

    Reply
  10. Jeanne says

    March 13, 2016 at 12:34 pm

    Capturing everything a mother would feel seeing her own baby give birth.

    Reply

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