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Gaps

May 25, 2020 10 Comments

Gaps

By Alexandra Winters

Afterward, you rest your palm on my cheek, in the space between my strawberry birthmark and chin, in the space between your distant wife and my short-tempered husband.

“I won’t leave her,” you say. “My kids…”

“We can’t keep doing this,” I say, throwing off the threadbare cotton sheet.

But we do.

Not all poisons come from toxins. Even vitamins can be poisonous. Or water. That which sustains also destroys, in high enough doses.

So we run away into the gaps, between weekday teleconferences and Sunday’s banana waffles, between sign-ins at day care and the quiet thrum of our paper-doll lives.

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  1. redhart8 says

    May 25, 2020 at 1:54 am

    Beautiful!

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  2. Vivian says

    May 25, 2020 at 7:20 am

    Absolutely beautiful!

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  3. lisafriedlanderlicsw says

    May 25, 2020 at 8:11 am

    Very poignant

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  4. Alex Tolansky says

    May 25, 2020 at 9:40 am

    What is beautiful and poignant about adultery?

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  5. Albert Katz says

    May 25, 2020 at 12:23 pm

    This is honest, and powerful, and true. Beautiful writing.

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  6. Sharon K says

    May 25, 2020 at 5:28 pm

    So powerful, and beautifully written. Love it.

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  7. Renee says

    May 26, 2020 at 12:30 am

    Stunningly written. This works perfectly in its short form.

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  8. Jeff Stone says

    May 26, 2020 at 1:40 am

    Kudos!

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  9. alexgreyauthor says

    May 26, 2020 at 2:05 am

    Bleak and lovely – great writing.

    Reply
  10. Seliser says

    May 27, 2020 at 8:11 am

    Rather poetic.

    Reply

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