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Getaway

November 20, 2023 2 Comments

By Brian K. Bolen

“It’s not safe to venture out there, Don,” my wife says, taking my hand. “Let’s wait till sunrise.”

“Fine.”

I sit, watching the snowfall. I can see her reflection, her perfect smile drawing closer.

“Care for some tea?” she asks.

I nod.

She returns, a cup and teapot on a tray. “Sugar?”

I make a peace sign.

“I think coming here was a perfect idea.”

“Yeah?”

“Yes. Now I finally have what I need for my latest novel,” she says.

“Will you finish it soon?”

“Absolutely, darling.”

I turn and see her approaching—ax poised high and a grin growing wider.

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  1. Pat R. says

    November 22, 2023 at 1:45 pm

    Enjoyed your story, love the evil twist!

    Reply
    • Brian K. Bolen says

      November 22, 2023 at 6:44 pm

      Thank you, Pat R. I enjoy writing horror stories.

      Reply

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