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Ghosted

February 12, 2016 5 Comments

Ghosted

By Dan Slaten

He walks the same streets they walked, passes the same restaurants where they shared their hopes and dreams. She is everywhere and nowhere. Closure is a phantom hiding just out of reach in the shadows between trees or in the lyrics of a favorite pop song. Her phone number is a dead-end street leading to bittersweet memories that seem to swell in importance with each passing day. She is still out there somewhere; the city isn’t large enough to avoid him forever. Or maybe it is. Maybe she was never real at all, even if today his heart tells him otherwise.

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  1. Jeanne Althouse says

    February 12, 2016 at 10:40 am

    Very nice.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    February 12, 2016 at 10:50 am

    Some great metaphors here, Dan. I really enjoyed this one.

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  3. Tom Hadrava says

    February 12, 2016 at 11:46 am

    Beautiful metaphors and imagery… It reads like a poem! (I read it about ten times… savourin it…) Thank you!

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  4. Barry O'Farrell says

    February 12, 2016 at 1:18 pm

    Great description of something which is not there. Ilike it.

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  5. John says

    February 15, 2016 at 12:52 pm

    Beautiful words

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