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Giving Way

May 18, 2017 4 Comments

Giving Way

By Jim Bonnor

He drives the middle road, across The Heath, tarmac edges crumbled like eczema, clamping his cheap car to the centre of the camber; the realm of tractors and pheasants.

The Give Way sign is ahead, the vanishing point of hedges higher than a man, set back on geese-wide green verges.

He’s going nowhere, just home, that silent empty sham.

He’s driven this a hundred times, always wondered: what if he ignored the sign, went straight across? Never any traffic.

Fifty yards to go and he puts his foot down. Fifty. Sixty. Adrenalin accelerates.

There is a moment he feels alive again.

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  1. JacciGoodingAuthor says

    May 18, 2017 at 6:18 am

    Wow – a really powerful story! I was racing at 50, then 60 – expecting the collision – but no! The ending is deeper than that. Loved it.

    Reply
    • James Bonnor says

      May 18, 2017 at 12:14 pm

      Thanks so much for reading Jacci. I’m glad you could put yourself there.

      Reply
  2. Irene says

    May 19, 2017 at 5:00 am

    Having done this while my brain was busy with matters aside from driving, there is nothing that makes one feel more alive. Obviously I lived to tell about it.

    Great story

    Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    May 20, 2017 at 10:33 am

    Kind of morbid–but a great read! Good job.

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