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Gods Bleed

October 12, 2019 5 Comments

Gods Bleed

By Kaitlin McManus

As a kid, I got nosebleeds. Horrible things that started in my sleep, soaking my pillow before it woke me. Cauterization helps—a medievally effective solution. It feels like getting punched, except you don’t bleed.

It wears off.

I take the bump from a pinky nail grown long for this purpose—it’s not my finger, but I know. Coke makes you feel like a god for fifteen minutes. I turn my beatific gaze towards my long-nailed supplicant. He recoils, recants.

I snatch him before he forsakes me. We’ll dance. We’ll rage. And he will lick the blood sacrament from my face.

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  1. Mark Harbinger says

    October 12, 2019 at 10:04 am

    Provocative and lovely. Well done and thank you!

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  2. steve dunn says

    October 12, 2019 at 1:37 pm

    nice work kaitland, a bit spooky, efficient and effective, i like “long nailed supplicant”

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  3. Debbie Settle says

    October 12, 2019 at 4:19 pm

    Pardon me. If you were trying to be disgusting, it worked. I hope you weren’t “coked up” when you wrote this. Been there, done that, threw away the t-shirt decades ago. Get some help if you need it! Take care of you! Too realistic, honey.

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  4. Adelside b Shaw says

    October 12, 2019 at 6:22 pm

    This turned me off

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  5. Judith Joubert says

    October 19, 2019 at 5:09 pm

    I liked your story. Did not get the impression that you encouraged drug abuse through your story. Everything but. Great writing

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