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Going Home

September 19, 2016 4 Comments

Going Home

By Andrew Schenck

Her bright blue eyes probed the recesses of my mind, trying to make sense of the stranger that had broken into her house.

“Who are you? What are you doing here?”

As I descended into the La-Z-Boy’s cotton cloud, I replied with silence.

The woman desperately searched for something beyond the purple irises guarding her front window. “I wanna go home!” she cried.

Tears welled up in my eyes, a visceral reaction to grief buried deep inside. “Grandma, you ARE home.”

Fixating on an old oak tree, which lifted its finger-like projections in vicarious supplication, she whimpered, “I wanna go home.”

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    September 19, 2016 at 9:09 am

    Touching, sad, bitter-sweet. A real Winner, Andrew.

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  2. Thomas Minder says

    September 19, 2016 at 10:34 am

    Beautiful, yet sad, story.

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  3. Joanna Bressler says

    September 19, 2016 at 12:51 pm

    Excellent story.

    Reply
  4. Aggie says

    September 19, 2016 at 1:28 pm

    Nice..poignant.

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