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Golden Boy Unmasked

June 5, 2024 2 Comments

By Sue Klotz DiStefano

Etched against the gray horizon, a salt-encrusted Adonis arises from the shallow swells, unbothered by the chilly, frothy sea. He sports the lean, sinewy, almost anorexic runner’s build adorned with a nest of sun-colored hair of soft, ripe avocado-yellow. Laughing seagulls form a white circle overhead, a crown of wings and raucous caws above this vision of surfer royalty in tattered shorts.

Turning toward me, the ideal fades into reality, a tobacco-damaged face that was too long caressed by the sun; an oxidized, overripe avocado whose yellow has metamorphosed to a sickly brown.

Presenting my back, truth awakened, I walk away.

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  1. Dan Graves says

    June 5, 2024 at 8:42 am

    so dies another dream

    Reply
    • Sue says

      June 11, 2024 at 3:06 pm

      Thank you for your comment.
      Keep on dreaming.
      Sue

      Reply

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