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Goodbyes

June 27, 2019 4 Comments

Goodbyes

By S. H. Cheatham

“Bye!” she hollered when the bus first rumbled into view.

She waved furiously on day eight.

Day twenty-two brought impenetrable silence.

On day thirty-six, she hugged me fiercely before racing off.

On day sixty-four, she muttered, “I hate you!” over some perceived slight (it was her mama’s birthday).

She kissed my cheek on day eighty-one.

Day ninety-six’s “I love you” sent me soaring.

On day one hundred fifty-nine, her eyes shining pools, she whispered, “I’ll miss you.”

Heartsick, I buckled her into the car. “I love you!” I cried as she rode out of my world and back into her mama’s.

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  1. Cassandra Hamilton says

    June 27, 2019 at 11:04 am

    Nice story. As a former foster parent, I get how this goes. I appreciate how you revealed the arc of this profound relationship.

    Reply
    • S. H. Cheatham says

      June 27, 2019 at 1:29 pm

      Thank you! I’m so glad this resonated with you!

      Reply
  2. Paula says

    June 28, 2019 at 12:34 pm

    What a lovely story!

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    • S. H. Cheatham says

      July 2, 2019 at 6:53 am

      Thank you very much!

      Reply

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