By Coco Jane
Simone licked her lips. “That guy in the cowboy hat is delicious,” she crooned. “How much?” All five women laughed.
“You’re on,” said Cathy. “Twenty bucks says he turns her down.” Momentarily, five Jacksons lay under a wine glass.
Simone rose, smoothed her dress, sauntered toward the bar. She smiled, leaning her cleavage toward him. He nodded.
After their dance, Simone brought Cowboy over. “Evening, ladies. Simone won’t be sharing your cab home.” She scooped up the twenties and departed with her man.
In his car, Simone fondled the bills. “Thanks, Roy. I really needed this.”
“Any time, Sis,” he replied.
An entertaining read and an ending I didn’t see coming. Nicely done.
Hilarious! Entertaining.
love it!
Great!
Great twist. Loved it.
I burst into laughter when I got to the ending.
That’s a great story. We all need a good laugh these days.
So clever! I love it.
Great ending
What an enjoyable read! Terrific story —— !
A fine short story with a fun twist. You get a lot done with few words.
Glad you all have enjoyed the story. This was really fun to write. I could just picture it all happening.
Ha ha! Loved it.
Brothers do have their uses. Lovely story.
A cute story.