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Hair

May 13, 2015 3 Comments

Hair by Kialy A. Megerth

By Kialy A. Megerth

Mother always had short hair. She didn’t care for the maintenance of long hair, and never liked to use special products or partake in elaborate beauty rituals. So when I saw her in the bathroom one day brushing a white colored cream through her hair I was puzzled. I asked what the cream was for and she replied, “It’s to make my hair grow long, to make Daddy happy.”

It must have worked, because that night when I awoke from a nightmare and stumbled into my parents’ bedroom, laying on top of Daddy was a beautiful woman with long, flowing hair.

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  1. skylarking4fun - Rebecca says

    May 13, 2015 at 3:30 pm

    Loved the unexpected shock in the last paragrap, Kialy.

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  2. Peter Barden says

    May 15, 2015 at 7:57 am

    I liked this very much. The surprise at the end left me thinking–as all good stories should.

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  3. exiledprospero says

    May 27, 2015 at 10:09 am

    Many truths within (much more than a strand).

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