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Have You Seen This Person?

September 10, 2023 10 Comments

By C. N. Martin

I can’t remember the last time I saw the sun.

Within the first few days, my perspective shifted from fear to solace. The musty, mildewy smell of the unfinished basement had become a comfort. Cool, rough concrete against my skin kept me grounded to the world. Exoskeletal companions easily replaced the human beings who no longer looked for me.

In the end, she was right. I was easily forgettable.

Now, the once-appealing promise of sunlight warming my skin has twisted and turned into a threat, far more than the glint of the knife that coerced me here in the first place.

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  1. Rudolph Ferro says

    September 10, 2023 at 1:40 pm

    Wow! Talk about criminals. Great story. Well told. Just the right spice of suspense thrown in. Keep them coming Mr/Ms Martin. You’re a great writer of thrillers.

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  2. Deanna Salser says

    September 10, 2023 at 3:37 pm

    Almost sounds like it’s coming from experience…

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  3. Asher Schmidt says

    September 10, 2023 at 4:11 pm

    Yet another fantastic piece from C.N. Martin! I got introduced to him through his short story that was featured in “Mirrors Reflecting Shadows.” Much like his story – The Attic – this piece has a level of detail that paints an entire world in a very small amount of time. Your world building skills are exquisite. I look forward to seeing longer pieces from you, Mr. Martin. Seriously, I’d love to see you publish a full book.

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  4. Margaret Adams says

    September 11, 2023 at 8:40 am

    Amazing! I was right there with you. Very descriptive. I feel and smell the basement. I want to read more!

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  5. Wayne Duvall says

    September 11, 2023 at 9:21 am

    Very compelling story. ?? Carry on now. ???

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  6. Bruno T. says

    September 13, 2023 at 12:02 pm

    This is a hauntingly!!!!

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  7. Ekta R. Garg says

    September 13, 2023 at 5:32 pm

    Stockholm syndrome, anyone?

    Great job!

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  8. Bud says

    September 15, 2023 at 1:53 pm

    Haunting scenario extremely well told.

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  9. Pamela Cartlidge says

    September 16, 2023 at 1:42 pm

    Wow. chilling! Well done.

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  10. Sandra L. Todd says

    October 1, 2023 at 7:14 pm

    C. N. Martin, well done! Thank you! Love a good mystery!

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