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Heart Matters

March 16, 2017 4 Comments

Heart Matters

By Julie Schroeder

I walked by trauma bay five, and briefly glanced toward the beeping emanating from the room and the elderly woman attached to the machine. She appeared so small, lost in a jumble of tubes and wires: her pale hand holding the edge of the hospital blanket.

I watched the man slowly get up from his chair beside her and kiss her wrinkled forehead, a tear running down his cheek, his finger caressing the side of her face. He smiled at her as the heart monitor sped up for a brief second and she weakly whispered, “You still make my heart flutter.”

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  1. Benita Wiggins says

    March 16, 2017 at 8:32 am

    And . . . you warmed my heart with your writing.

    Reply
    • Julie Schroeder says

      March 16, 2017 at 11:44 am

      Thank you. I am glad you liked it.

      Reply
  2. Firdaus Parvez says

    March 16, 2017 at 11:23 pm

    Oh this! Loved it.

    Reply
  3. Julie Schroeder says

    March 17, 2017 at 11:20 am

    Thank you.

    Reply

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