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Heart of Glass

January 28, 2016 5 Comments

Heart Of Glass

By Jon Nixon

The broken neon sign, blinked and winked ‘D SCO’ in dusty, coloured letters.

Four a.m. on the Spanish coast, separated from the group—and beautifully incapable.

The pink arrow hooking under the ‘O’ guided him in.

As he entered the empty bar, Eighties’ pop music flooded his every nerve.

The floor, sticky.

Inebriation level, overload.

‘Blondie’ pulsed through the ageing sound-system.

This was his moment, alone, without the rest of the rugby boys he’d left in the strip-club.

He closed his eyes.

And danced.

Then danced some more.

Danced the dance of an eighteen stone loose forward who loved The Eighties.

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  1. Vesna says

    January 28, 2016 at 12:30 pm

    I like this one. The fragmented prose and letters mirrors the girlish nature inside – the exterior comes last in the story.

    Reply
    • jon nixon says

      January 28, 2016 at 12:51 pm

      Thank you for the nice feedback !

      Reply
  2. Bobby Warner says

    January 28, 2016 at 8:35 pm

    A nice bit of nostalgia. Good story.

    Reply
  3. katejones73 says

    January 29, 2016 at 4:54 am

    Really liked this – and I’m also an 80’s throwback!:)

    Reply
  4. Jon Nixon says

    January 29, 2016 at 5:34 am

    Thank you 🙂

    Reply

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