
By Jon Nixon
The broken neon sign, blinked and winked ‘D SCO’ in dusty, coloured letters.
Four a.m. on the Spanish coast, separated from the group—and beautifully incapable.
The pink arrow hooking under the ‘O’ guided him in.
As he entered the empty bar, Eighties’ pop music flooded his every nerve.
The floor, sticky.
Inebriation level, overload.
‘Blondie’ pulsed through the ageing sound-system.
This was his moment, alone, without the rest of the rugby boys he’d left in the strip-club.
He closed his eyes.
And danced.
Then danced some more.
Danced the dance of an eighteen stone loose forward who loved The Eighties.
I like this one. The fragmented prose and letters mirrors the girlish nature inside – the exterior comes last in the story.
Thank you for the nice feedback !
A nice bit of nostalgia. Good story.
Really liked this – and I’m also an 80’s throwback!:)
Thank you 🙂