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Her Biscuits

January 21, 2021 8 Comments

By Stephen Murtough

He always got heartburn when he ate biscuits late at night. She said it was his own fault, that he should have shown some self-restraint. But tonight, he ate them anyway. In fact, he gobbled them up as he sat on his own in their small little kitchen. The dishes and bowls from earlier were still dotted around the living room, and he hadn’t bothered to clean up that coffee spillage which his brother-in-law had been mortified about. Because she was dead, put to rest earlier today. And he wanted to eat his biscuits, just so he could hear her voice.

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  1. A.D says

    January 21, 2021 at 7:17 am

    Oh, the ending…:(

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  2. Dave Daniel says

    January 21, 2021 at 10:33 am

    Very tender tale.

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  3. Virginia says

    January 21, 2021 at 11:19 am

    Very touching tale.

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  4. Scott Brian Blanke says

    January 21, 2021 at 11:44 am

    Very strong

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  5. BB says

    January 21, 2021 at 4:44 pm

    That’s a good reason to eat biscuits.

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  6. Shoshauna says

    January 21, 2021 at 9:55 pm

    Oh, that final line….killer ending.

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  7. Violet James says

    January 27, 2021 at 8:42 am

    Oh, how poignant. I didn’t expect this ending and it hit my heart. Thank you so much for writing this.

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  8. Graham Leo says

    February 1, 2021 at 8:46 am

    Very good, love the ending

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