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Her Glare

May 18, 2015 8 Comments

Her Glare

By Bunmi Oke

“Darling, you know well I love every inch of you,” holding her whitish hand, “and I want nothing less than to spend the rest of my days with you.”

She sucks in her lower lip in childlike captivation.

I dip my right hand into my suit, hunkering on one knee. She gasps, glee erupting out of the well of her dimples.

Then my hand emerges with a cute little box.

“Sweetheart, would you promise to wear it always—especially this harmattan time?”

A vaseline container.

If looks could kill, I should summarily be cremated under the radiation of her fiery glare.

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  1. olola oni says

    May 18, 2015 at 8:25 am

    lol…here is what i like about ur writing…ur ability to make obvious d humor in what is otherwise an everyday occurence.superb one again.welk done!

    Reply
    • bunmioke says

      May 18, 2015 at 11:22 am

      How humbling to read those comments, Olola Oni.

      Reply
  2. Adeyeye says

    May 18, 2015 at 7:26 am

    Superb, suspenseful !!!!!!

    Reply
    • bunmioke says

      May 19, 2015 at 2:39 pm

      Thanks much; I do appreciate.

      Reply
  3. aghogho says

    May 18, 2015 at 8:55 am

    Nice story,as always bro..I really laughed..errm,hope am permitted to do this,but does the title need a review?

    Reply
    • bunmioke says

      May 18, 2015 at 11:25 am

      A good thing I was able to make you laugh again, Aghogho.
      Thanks for the thought about the title.

      Reply
  4. Gary Davison says

    May 19, 2015 at 1:51 pm

    Very nice… even better when I looked up what ‘harmattan’ was… good twist

    Reply
    • bunmioke says

      May 19, 2015 at 2:40 pm

      Aw, how delighted I am to hear that. Much thanks, Gary Davison.

      Reply

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