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Her Last Night on County Road 23

November 14, 2023 4 Comments

By JD Clapp

She rested in the hospital bed by the fireplace and felt its warmth as snow piled outside the window. She listened to squirrels rustling in the farmhouse wall.

They told her Father Russo was coming to see her later.

“I’m not ready for last rites.”

She fought sleep but dozed off. Her breathing shallow, she dreamt the squirrels were angels singing.

She woke startled, her son beside her.

“Am I dead?” she asked.

“Do I look like an angel, Ma?”

Smiling, she gazed out the window at the falling snow and somber sky, wondering if heaven would be that peaceful.

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  1. Derek McMillan says

    November 14, 2023 at 7:18 am

    This is a very sympathetic and compassionate story. Death is either eternal rest or we go to a place where there is no pain.

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  2. David Higham says

    November 15, 2023 at 7:59 am

    Love the quite humour.

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  3. Bella Mahaya Carter says

    November 15, 2023 at 6:07 pm

    Thanks for this sweet story. ?

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  4. Rabab says

    November 18, 2023 at 4:37 am

    Beautiful.

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