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Her Turn at Dying

June 14, 2016 8 Comments

Her Turn At Dying

By Dante A Murray

My mother is taking her turn at dying in an upstairs bedroom that one stranger and six family members have previously died in. Screaming, she is heading for a white light.

Everyone rushes upstairs.

Uncle Sal breaks his hip when someone, who is jockeying for position, pushes him over the banister.

Mother opens her eyes and asks for wine in the 8oz Mason jar she drank Riesling from, when we were children. Then, the house is still again.

On the day she is buried, we acknowledge each other with nods as if, in this ordeal, we had all developed paranormal abilities.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    June 14, 2016 at 8:42 am

    A bit of paranormal humor; a refreshing story, Dante.

    Reply
  2. Sarkis Antikajian says

    June 14, 2016 at 9:22 am

    Different. I like it.

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  3. Lady Judith says

    June 14, 2016 at 9:34 am

    yes, very true. At family funerals,the paranormal sets in , with nods and no words.
    great discription Dante—very niceley written about a sad time

    Reply
  4. Smila W. Planete says

    June 14, 2016 at 9:49 am

    Super quirky! I thoroughly enjoyed the mason jar and Uncle Sal’s broken hip. These had to have come from somewhere. Fun and thoughtful.

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    • Dante says

      September 13, 2016 at 5:35 am

      Thank you

      Reply
  5. Vesna says

    June 14, 2016 at 9:54 am

    Love it! Cliches and platitudes nuked out of existence in this one. Wonderful glance at how death is a part of life.

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  6. Luann says

    June 14, 2016 at 10:00 am

    Love the details and “gallows humor” 😉

    Reply
  7. Dante Murray says

    June 15, 2016 at 8:29 am

    Love the feedback

    Reply

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