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Hexagons

May 6, 2016 6 Comments

Hexagons

By Theresa Dozier

In second grade, Sister Garcia made us draw circles every day. I drew hexagons instead.

“God is watching you and doesn’t like little girls who misbehave.”

Sister Garcia’s scolding was just like Father’s Tom’s scolding in Confession every Saturday.

“But why is it wrong?” I’d asked.

I eventually stopped going because kneeling in the confessional had become too strenuous on my protruding belly.

One day, Mom called Father Tom and asked if he would visit me. That was after I had been transferred out of the maternity ward.

“Has she recovered?” he asked.

“We don’t know. She won’t stop drawing hexagons.”

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  1. Ann Toerner-Rich says

    May 6, 2016 at 10:59 am

    Heavy!

    Reply
    • Theresa Dozier says

      May 7, 2016 at 7:26 am

      Thanks for reading!

      Reply
  2. b. says

    May 6, 2016 at 11:26 am

    Long live the rebels! And, those that can tell their stories. Thanks.

    Reply
    • Theresa Dozier says

      May 7, 2016 at 7:25 am

      Thank you!

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    May 7, 2016 at 11:01 am

    Like the way you really show the girl’s rebelliousness: Most would have used a square or a triangle instead of a circle. You chose a hexagon. Really makes the point of the story stand out. Great job, Theresa!

    Reply
    • Theresa Dozier says

      May 8, 2016 at 8:36 am

      Thanks for reading; I appreciate the feedback!

      Reply

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