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His Name is Peter

March 20, 2016 7 Comments

His name is Peter

By Mary Thompson

He doesn’t look like a Peter. I hear him from my flat and I turn up the telly to obliterate the cacophony of swear words invading the street. I wonder if he has Tourette’s, but my neighbour, Nick, says, “No, he’s like that after his injections.”

He pops up frequently; his eyes are playful and unfocused, but I sense the warmth in them so I say hello.

Today I spot him routing through a bin by the bus stop. When he sees me, he looks up and says, “Hello, Miss, have you got a cigarette?”

“No, sorry,” I say.

He smiles.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 20, 2016 at 10:01 am

    Methinks, that with all his faults, Peter is probably a pretty likeable guy. Like this story.

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    • maryruth16 says

      March 20, 2016 at 11:39 pm

      Peter is based on a man who lives in my street – he’s very sweet ? Thanks for reading.

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    • maryruth16 says

      March 20, 2016 at 11:40 pm

      He’s based on a man in my street – v sweet guy. Thanks for reading ?

      Reply
  2. writingmywayoutofdepression says

    March 20, 2016 at 11:04 am

    I liked the lack of judgement so you warm to Peter. Nicely written.

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    • maryruth16 says

      March 20, 2016 at 11:41 pm

      Thanks ?

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  3. William Shaw says

    March 20, 2016 at 12:33 pm

    Very nice little bit of social realism. Thanks for this.

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    • maryruth16 says

      March 20, 2016 at 11:42 pm

      Thanks, William.

      Reply

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