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Holding Hands

March 21, 2016 8 Comments

Holding Hands

By Linda McKenney

My unworldly, ever curious granddaughter is on the cusp of all things possible. We’re in Boston, and she is eager to explore the aquarium.  Until her camera freezes. The frustration she carries in her back pocket skulks in.

“Let’s go!” she demands.

The shark aquarist offers a fix… Joyfully, she resumes her photography…

Finished with watery creatures, she studies me with question-mark eyes.

“How about shopping?” I suggest.

Crossing the street, she takes my hand.

“I don’t want you falling down,” my preteen quips.

How much longer will she tolerate this closeness?

I cherish the feel of her hand in mine.

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  1. Jo Patterson says

    March 21, 2016 at 9:24 am

    Good story. Grandmas can relate…

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  2. Leslie Sittner says

    March 21, 2016 at 9:30 am

    Lovely Linda. Yes, we Grandmas can relate…it’s even more tenuous when they’re little boys…

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    March 21, 2016 at 9:35 am

    Enjoy the closeness while they are young–they grow up very fast! Nice job!

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  4. Sue says

    March 21, 2016 at 12:13 pm

    I love it that it becomes our (the old farts’) point of view. Thank you kindly! 🙂

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  5. majokmindfuleating says

    March 21, 2016 at 5:15 pm

    thanks for the feedback!

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  6. Jimmy says

    March 22, 2016 at 6:04 am

    A story I have lived many times. Your words captured the experience very nicely. In my experience the closeness never has to end, it just changes form.

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  7. Kerry E.B. Black says

    March 24, 2016 at 6:13 am

    Oh, fleeting childhood! How long, indeed?

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  8. Jennifer L Freed says

    March 26, 2016 at 4:37 am

    It’s not just grandmas that can relate, but moms, too!
    Jennifer

    Reply

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