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Home Sweet Home

December 30, 2023 14 Comments

By Lori Cramer

Finding the right living situation can be tricky for a young couple. We considered a variety of options before finally settling on this place. Although others had more square footage or better views or amenities like swimming pools and tennis courts, this was the only one with utilities, cable, and internet included. Would we prefer a bed instead of a foldout couch, an oven rather than a microwave? Of course! But this is all we can afford right now. Besides, there’s something about this place that really feels like home. Especially when Mom comes down the stairs to do her laundry.

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  1. Valli says

    December 30, 2023 at 10:12 am

    Nice read… loved the ending… kudos…

    Reply
    • Lori says

      December 30, 2023 at 5:49 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  2. Tom says

    December 30, 2023 at 6:30 pm

    The reality for so many people these days.

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    • Lori says

      December 30, 2023 at 7:00 pm

      Sad but true.

      Reply
  3. Nina Miller says

    December 30, 2023 at 6:49 pm

    Perfect ending!!! So true!

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    • Lori says

      December 30, 2023 at 7:01 pm

      Thank you, Nina!

      Reply
  4. Liz says

    December 31, 2023 at 12:27 am

    Ha! Nice! Let’s hope their dreams of a bigger place, with pool, come true for them in time! 🙂

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    • Lori says

      December 31, 2023 at 2:02 pm

      Here’s hoping!

      Reply
  5. Mike McCarty says

    January 3, 2024 at 7:47 am

    Your last sentence ties everything together. Those 11 words tell me that this home is truly the right choice. Nicely done.

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    • Lori says

      January 4, 2024 at 11:46 am

      Thank you, Mike!

      Reply
  6. Deborah Sale-Butler says

    January 3, 2024 at 10:07 am

    Great piece. We’re on the other side of that story, moving into an ADU apartment under my mother-in-law after 23 years of marriage. We both have completely separate living spaces, but unlike other places, where hearing footsteps above would be a bother, I’m happy to hear her puttering around, doing laundry, chatting with friends. And instead of driving an hour, like we used to, now we trot upstairs for a cup of coffee. We can afford a different arrangement, but chose this one to be there for each other. I like that you kept it upbeat and sweet at the end.

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    • Lori says

      January 4, 2024 at 11:56 am

      Thank you for reading, for your kind comments, and for sharing your story.

      Reply
  7. M says

    January 5, 2024 at 6:40 pm

    As Dorothy said in the movie, The Wizard of Oz, ‘There is No Place Like Home.’

    A lovely story.

    Reply
    • Lori says

      January 6, 2024 at 1:52 pm

      Thank you, M!

      Reply

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