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Hope

March 11, 2020 11 Comments

Hope

By Larry J. Maltin

She huddled under the snow-covered bench, curled into a tight ball, trying to preserve every degree of warmth her emaciated body could generate. It was at least a week since she ate. Shivering wasted precious energy, but she could not help it.

A man walked past. She whimpered. You poor thing, he said, then he reached out, scooped her up, and wrapped her in his coat. Was he savior or predator? Whatever his intentions, following him could not be any worse  than the hunger and the cold.

She did not know what possessed her, but she licked his face.

He beamed.

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  1. Davena O' Neill says

    March 11, 2020 at 7:05 am

    Oh, lovely

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  2. Philip Scholz says

    March 11, 2020 at 7:15 am

    Very nice. Glad there’s a happy ending. Well done.

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  3. Sharon says

    March 11, 2020 at 7:46 am

    Love it

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  4. Susan says

    March 11, 2020 at 10:02 am

    It sounds like she needs a place to live and support from government agencies, healthcare institutions, and community outreach centers. The story does a good job of illustrating the homeless situation in the United States.

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  5. Dianne M Hendricks says

    March 11, 2020 at 10:58 am

    OMG, Larry! Tears sprang up when I got to the end. Great job,and very touching.

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  6. Cathy Cade says

    March 11, 2020 at 11:21 am

    Ahhh. Well thought of.

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  7. Rosemary Reader and Writer says

    March 11, 2020 at 1:28 pm

    Ahhh indeed!

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  8. Miera says

    March 11, 2020 at 8:05 pm

    Editorial comment: It was a week since she had eaten.

    Sweet!

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  9. K8Ghost says

    March 12, 2020 at 12:32 am

    Yes. Sounds like a happy ending… and I will go with that flow for this 101. Well done.

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  10. Vivian says

    March 12, 2020 at 7:54 am

    Sweet story.

    Reply
  11. Darold says

    March 13, 2020 at 2:37 pm

    A touching story Larry. Well done.

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