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How It Ended

September 21, 2024 7 Comments

By Susan Eve Haar

“He’s off his rocker with morphine,” his stepson says.

“That’s Eliot, ‘The Waste Land,’” I tell him.

I go in. John smiles, a glimmer of the old dog. I climb in bed with him, smelling the sanitized rot, feeling the sheath of muscle and inside the churning, an ocean of organs melted by chemo. He went to the Olympics, this man.

“It’s 60 degrees below zero on the River Styx. I can’t see around the corner, but I’m curious.” He pumps the morphine into his arm.

And now I’m really crying.

“I love you,” he says, holding me, protecting me still.

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  1. Mary Gorman says

    September 21, 2024 at 12:24 pm

    Wonderful story so well written. I was there. x

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  2. susan eve haar says

    September 22, 2024 at 4:19 am

    Thank you, Mary.

    Reply
  3. Hamza says

    September 25, 2024 at 5:15 pm

    Absolutely transportative – Bless you!

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    • Susan Eve Haar says

      September 30, 2024 at 2:26 pm

      Thanks Hamza, I am humbled and given strength.

      Reply
  4. Ed Kratz says

    September 27, 2024 at 10:40 pm

    Great images. Very powerful.

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    • Susan Eve Haar says

      September 30, 2024 at 2:26 pm

      Thank you, Ed for taking the time to comment. It really makes a difference and is very supportive. Susan

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  5. Pamela Cartlidge says

    November 2, 2024 at 12:16 pm

    You capture the emotions beautifully. Well done.

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