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Hug

January 20, 2018 2 Comments

Hug

By Matt Weatherbee

Maybe then Ma’d hug us. If we hung ourselves like this laundry. Maybe then she’d put the bottle down, stop yelling. The wind rips the sheet from our hands and shrink-wraps Hindi. She moans, banshee-like. We giggle and hang the sheet. The clothesline shakes. The sheet we just hung flies off, zigzagging and flip-flopping up, down, and all around. We try to catch it. But it catches us instead, tying its corners under our arms. The sheet swells, twists, and pulls us off the ground. We float up, up, up, and away. It was the greatest hug we could’ve ever gotten.

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  1. Susan says

    January 20, 2018 at 10:41 am

    Beautifully written! Excellent imagery.

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  2. hazel turner says

    January 21, 2018 at 11:49 am

    I love this. Skillfully written to conjure the pictures with a lovely ending.y

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