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I Never Knew

September 8, 2020 2 Comments

By John Riley

“Tilt back your nose,” my uncle said. Blood ran in two streams across my upper lip and slopped down both sides of my mouth. “You’re always staring at the ground. That’s probably why the punk popped you.” His lips were squeezed tight. He had been in two wars and one prison. When he died, his friend Alejandro knelt by the casket. His shiny tears fell to the floor. My mother stared at him. Her lips pressed so tightly together they made a single line. Then she looked at me and said, “It’s good he’s dead. His life never made any sense.”

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  1. Alex Markovich says

    September 8, 2020 at 11:02 am

    Some people fight back and some turn the other cheek. John, you write convincingly and elegantly in favor of not allowing both cheeks to be slapped. I love it.

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  2. Michael D. Brown says

    September 8, 2020 at 6:51 pm

    Heads up, earn a mouthful of rain and lead a forgettable life. Still, you will be remembered by someone.

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