By Kavi Nielsen
Listen, please, because I don’t have much time. They’re coming, and I have to go. You’ll never forgive me, I know, but please take that spilled-out heart and those shattered eyes and run. I will never regret this, I promise, because I would give my half-lived life a million times over so you can breathe yours in for as long as you dare, but I know you hate when I say that, and I know you’ll hate what will happen next. I’m sorry.
But you have to run, and you have to leave me behind, and—
Hellooo?
I love you. Go.
Good job of creating a sense of urgency, powerful emotions. I’d like to read the larger story.
Powerful piece. Well done.
“…take that spilled-out heart and those shattered eyes and run.” This packs so many emotions in so few words. I really enjoyed this piece and like others have said would love to read a longer piece. Thank you for sharing your talents.