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Impossible to Eat

June 16, 2022 15 Comments

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He hated me. I would wear my rainbow shirt to the dinner table and he would sit, working on his sixth beer, staring in judgment as he chewed on some innocent slaughtered animal. I was always too skinny, too weak to be a man.

One night he ran out of beer too early—or a little too late. He left, grabbing his car keys. We heard the tires squeal and then the crash.

“Mom,” I said, “does Dad have life insurance?”

“All we could afford,” she replied, plainly.

I never cried at his funeral. I think he would have liked that.

By Leif Gregersen

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  1. Helen C says

    June 16, 2022 at 7:02 am

    Very poignant with lots of questions raised.

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  2. Scott Brian Blanke says

    June 16, 2022 at 7:16 am

    Love it. They should like it.

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  3. Joan Reed says

    June 16, 2022 at 8:16 am

    Sad

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  4. Yolanda Joosten says

    June 16, 2022 at 10:12 am

    There’s a lot of subtlety here. It’s poignant and sad.

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  5. albert Norman katz says

    June 16, 2022 at 10:45 am

    Well-layered and subtle description of masculinity. Nice!

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  6. JK Hayward-Trout says

    June 16, 2022 at 11:21 am

    Satirical karma at is finest.

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  7. Chieh says

    June 16, 2022 at 12:57 pm

    Like the irony. But don’t get the title. Why is it “impossible to eat”?

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    • Leif Gregersen says

      June 16, 2022 at 3:36 pm

      I borrowed the idea of it being “impossible to eat” from a movie with Michael Douglas in it, titled, “Falling Down.” In the movie, Michael Douglas played a man who lost his job as an engineer and was divorced from his wife who also wouldn’t let him see his child. He was forced to live with his mother in his 40s. His mother told a detective that came to ask what had happened to her son (he had gone on a rampage) that one of the things he would do that was extremely disturbing to her was stare at her with hatred in his eyes at the supper table and she would sit, unable to eat (I think she said, “swallow”) any of her food.

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      • Chieh says

        June 16, 2022 at 9:02 pm

        Thanks for explaining it. Now I get it — in a state where the boy was unable to eat, feeling uncomfortable when having a critical dad. Meanwhile, I feel it could be understood as a two-way discomfort. His father started it, making the hatred to develop, which was revealed in a self-inflicted destruction.

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  8. Cam Petrie says

    June 16, 2022 at 2:14 pm

    It is very hard to let go.

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  9. Angie says

    June 16, 2022 at 3:56 pm

    Love this. Really powerful ending too.

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  10. Jim Ginshinan says

    June 16, 2022 at 3:59 pm

    The tension builds to the point, “Does Dad have life insurance? No illusions left to ponder.

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  11. Carline says

    June 18, 2022 at 3:14 am

    Rat!!

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    • Carline says

      June 18, 2022 at 4:07 am

      Brat, I meant…

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  12. Mary says

    June 24, 2022 at 10:17 am

    So much conveyed in that last sentence. Great piece of work.

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