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Imprisoned

May 19, 2016 2 Comments

Imprisoned

By Parker

After twenty free years, compassion for another had led to Jodi’s capture. Sweat rolled down her face as she shaped the glowing metal. Dipping it into the cool water, she struggled with the object’s weight.  Steam rose, mixing with sweat and tears.  She glared at her captor with intense defiance.

Dalton took the metal band from her hands and snapped it around her neck.  Picking up the attached chain, he led her out into the sunlight.

“How much can I get for this fine young woman?” he called to the crowd. “She can cook, work in the fields, tend the animals…”

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    May 19, 2016 at 11:10 am

    Wow! Powerful story with a twist ending. This is almost brutal; packs a definite punch.

    Reply
  2. Julie Lees says

    May 20, 2016 at 2:38 am

    Evocative tale that paints a vivid picture.

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