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In Limbo

July 12, 2017 4 Comments

IN LIMBO

By Vijai Pant

“It’s 75 now,” Pallavi gave the latest update.

“Good going. Bring it down a little more and mission accomplished,” the voice at the other end added encouragingly.

Pallavi kept quiet.

“Are you there?” he asked.

“Yes, Uncle,” she responded weakly, remembering the time when the Agnihotris had come home to ‘see’ her.

“She’s exactly the type of daughter-in-law we want,” Mrs. Agnihotri had then remarked, adding, “If she could just shed off a little.”

And ever since, Pallavi had been shedding weight to hold on to hope, with the Agnihotris still not committing.

“For how long will this continue?” Pallavi wondered.

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  1. Sue O'Donovan says

    July 12, 2017 at 4:18 am

    That resonates.

    Reply
  2. VIJAI PANT says

    July 12, 2017 at 10:06 am

    Yep true, at least in our part of the world (India).

    Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    July 12, 2017 at 1:58 pm

    I can almost feel the frustration in the last line. Good one.

    Reply
    • VIJAI PANT says

      July 14, 2017 at 5:13 am

      Thank you.

      Reply

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