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Initiation

September 25, 2024 8 Comments

By John B. Mahaffie

Tears pooled in David’s eyes, his hand hot with pain. He ducked into the shadows behind the dugout so the other boys would not see.

The hard-hit baseball he caught gloveless left deep red lines across two fingers. The lines mirrored the pattern and color of baseball stitching.

He would not cry.

In minutes, the sear of pain faded. But the marks, shown off at school, tattooed his fingers for days.

Now he stood at practice with the loud boys. Now he slapped his fist into his glove and laughed loud at their jokes. Now he wasn’t the same boy.

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Comments

  1. MG Chapin says

    September 25, 2024 at 8:06 am

    I love this! Who hasn’t been there in their life at some point?

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  2. Bud says

    September 25, 2024 at 4:01 pm

    Very nice Little League story about fitting in and acceptance. Also, David probably held his tears because he remembered “there’s no crying in baseball.”

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  3. David Higham says

    September 26, 2024 at 11:50 am

    What a wonderful little story about growing up. Perfect.

    Reply
  4. Scott Brian Blanke says

    September 26, 2024 at 1:35 pm

    So true. That was me.

    Reply
  5. Ed Kratz says

    September 27, 2024 at 9:45 am

    Perfectly true story of growing up.
    Excellent.,

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  6. K F Lerner says

    September 27, 2024 at 9:46 am

    OMG I love this. Well done.

    Reply
  7. Malcolm Todd says

    October 6, 2024 at 5:30 am

    A perfect story. I found it sad – poignant.

    Reply
  8. Pamela Cartlidge says

    November 2, 2024 at 12:10 pm

    Sad but true. The enduring pains just to fit in!

    Reply

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