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Jack’s Pumpkin

September 26, 2024 4 Comments

By Christopher Mattravers-Taylor

A smile twitched my lips; the pumpkin would be perfect for Jack. I drove home from the farm and spent hours with my tongue protruding, carving the tough flesh with a kitchen knife. A malformed Spiderman’s face, my son’s favourite superhero, emerged from the squash. Jack never failed to laugh at my artistry.

I placed a lit candle in the pumpkin. Alongside a small plastic cauldron full of M&M’s, the sweets he loved, I lowered it onto the narrow mound of earth.

Tears moistened my cheeks, like a drizzle on weathered stone. Halloween had always been Jack’s favourite time of year.

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  1. Shirley says

    September 26, 2024 at 6:12 am

    Wow! So moving for such a short piece

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  2. Jenny Hoffman says

    September 27, 2024 at 2:24 am

    Immediately emotive , well written .

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  3. Bud says

    October 2, 2024 at 7:09 pm

    So poignant and powerful.

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  4. Ramona Taylor says

    October 2, 2024 at 8:48 pm

    ‘Tears …like a drizzle on weathered stone’ –love this line. Well done!

    Reply

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