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Jam

June 22, 2016 4 Comments

Jam

By Phil Mullins

“Morning,” she said.

He’d been making sandwiches. Now, he stood motionless frowning at the spoon in his hand.

“What’s wrong?” she asked.

“Jelly,” he said.

“Jelly?” she repeated.

“Trying to spread jelly on bread is ridiculous. Why not just buy jam?”

“Okay,” she said.

“Jam doesn’t destroy bread,” he continued, testily. “Besides, the kids can’t tell, once it’s on the sandwich.”

“True,” she said.

“It’s all the same, you know. All grape-flavored sugar injected into jars by machines.”

“You’re right,” she said.

She patted his arm and resisted the familiar urge to tell him the kids had been grown-up for years.

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  1. Jazz says

    June 22, 2016 at 10:20 am

    Unfortunately, a familiar scene in many a family. And well told….

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  2. David Galef says

    June 22, 2016 at 1:19 pm

    Well-paced and poignant.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    June 22, 2016 at 6:27 pm

    The twist at the end tells it all. Surprised me. Good story.

    Reply
  4. philmullins says

    June 24, 2016 at 1:23 pm

    Thank you all for the feedback. Helpful to hear!

    Reply

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