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Jar of Eyeballs

May 30, 2021 5 Comments

By Alec Thompson

Jack slammed the door and stomped to the street. In a childhood fit, feeling out of control and unnoticed, he flung his jar of eyeballs into the sky. It hung suspended for a long moment—then plunged.

Glass shattered, sending plastic eyes scattering across the black-tarred road. They rolled to lazy stops, gravity working its intractable will. The tar began to boil and writhe, sucking the orbs below and tumbling Jack to the sidewalk.

A huge, bulbous shape erupted, eyeballs clinging to its surface. The monster turned on the boy, snarling. A hundred eyes gazed down at Jack, awaiting his command.

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  1. Amanda B. says

    May 30, 2021 at 3:34 pm

    What a fun, imaginative story. Thanks for a good read Alec!

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  2. Alec Thompson says

    May 30, 2021 at 7:00 pm

    Thanks so much Amanda!

    Reply
  3. Violet James says

    May 31, 2021 at 9:16 am

    Wow I love this story. So many twists in such a few words!!!!

    Reply
  4. Kelly Louisa Balliu says

    May 31, 2021 at 9:43 am

    Could imagine this used as an episode of Goosebumps.. well written 🙂

    Reply
  5. Lydia Q says

    June 6, 2021 at 9:43 am

    Very very creepy

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